The Accident
This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story… This is Gabe's interpretation of the pictures
One afternoon in the city it was very cold and people were shopping.
The old man with a wooden stick walking stepped onto the busy road. He didn't look both ways and almost got knocked out !
The old man didn't see the car but the car driver did see the old man. The car driver slammed on his brakes, and the car almost did a drift.
We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for the final caption…...
One afternoon in the city it was very cold and people were shopping.
I saw an old man with a wooden walking stick. He was just about to cross a busy road.
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ReplyDeleteGabe this story is well sequenced. You sentences are well structured with a capital letter at the start and full stop at the end. All of your sentences made sense.
ReplyDeleteNext Step- I would like you to consider to add more detail to your writing. I can see in your draft the the city wasn't busy. That would have been an original idea that creates heaps of pictures for the reader.
Awesome Writing